A poem I posted awhile ago, just thought I would re-post it for some for more thoughts on it. Any criticisms?

its great. i normally dont even glance at people posting their poetry, but I saw the picture of kerouac in your avatar and couldnt resist. I can see some Ginsberg's pionate influence in your poem and even some E.E. mings. I love your comparisons of age/youth, the fact that your mind exceeds your age and that you are perhaps suggesting you are wiser than your years. I give it an A+ :)